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Posted November 13, 2015 10:46 · last edited November 13, 2015 10:46

CactusJones wrote:

martinb wrote:

Stanza: 3 lines.

The first lines compares the glorious grace of Carter and co. to the PEC lad from Te Puke: Ryan Thomas, with the courage of an All Black.

The second line states the result of the game. The culprit refers back to the first line: Ryan Thomas. " The satorial shaking of the feathers" refers to the preening of a peacock, and in this case the celebration of the winning goal.

The third line again refers back to the first line and the hero of this epic poem: Ryan Thomas. Our poet compares the genius of Thomas through the coincidence of him being given the number 14 to a famous hero of yore: Johan Cruijff. Was this later day hero the same as this legendary one of the days of yore? Completely, totally, abso-bloody-lutely.

(martinb, Forum Poetry of Football, page 1, 2015)

Geez Louise, I feel like I am back in High School and doing unfamiliar text with all the language features and stuff! 

Only use I could think of for my BA...joke being I think it's not too far away from accurate...

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martinb edited November 13, 2015 10:46
CactusJones wrote:
martinb wrote:

Stanza: 3 lines.

The first lines compares the glorious grace of Carter and co. to the PEC lad from Te Puke: Ryan Thomas, with the courage of an All Black.

The second line states the result of the game. The culprit refers back to the first line: Ryan Thomas. " The satorial shaking of the feathers" refers to the preening of a peacock, and in this case the celebration of the winning goal.

The third line again refers back to the first line and the hero of this epic poem: Ryan Thomas. Our poet compares the genius of Thomas through the coincidence of him being given the number 14 to a famous hero of yore: Johan Cruijff. Was this later day hero the same as this legendary one of the days of yore? Completely, totally, abso-bloody-lutely.

(martinb, Forum Poetry of Football, page 1, 2015)

Geez Louise, I feel like I am back in High School and doing unfamiliar text with all the language features and stuff! 

Only use I could think of for my BA...