History for Bevan

Hi guys, thanks for your efforts.

You had been improving, but this podcast was a step back. 

Four suggestions:

1) Don't make baseless accusations about players enjoying a night out in Sydney. If you have it on a good source, then maybe, but this just sounded like you were trashing the player without any justification.

2) Don't talk about what you ate last week. Would you care if you were listening to another podcast that talked about what they ate?

3) Don't moan about something that happened in your own match a year ago. Where is the context for the listener?

4) It's better to be brief and to the point, than waffle on about irrelevant things. The listeners may get bored.

Do keep it up though; you will be a slick unit by the time the season starts.

Hi guys, thanks for your efforts.

You had been improving, but this podcast was a step back. 

Three suggestions:

1) Don't make baseless accusations about players enjoying a night out in Sydney. If you have it on a good source, then maybe, but this just sounded like you were trashing the player without any justification.

2) Don't talk about what you ate last week. Would you care if you were listening to another podcast that talked about what they ate?

3) Don't moan about something that happened in your own match a year ago. Where is the context for the listener?

In general, it's better to be brief and to the point, than waffle on about irrelevant things. The listeners may get bored.

Do keep it up though; you will be a slick unit by the time the season starts.

Hi guys, thanks for your efforts.

You had been improving, but this podcast was a step back. 

Three suggestions:

1) Don't make baseless accusations about players enjoying a night out in Sydney. If you have it on a good source, then maybe, but this just sounded like you were trashing the player without any justification.

2) Don't talk about what you ate last week. Would you care if you were listening to another podcast that talked about what they ate?

3) Don't moan about something that happened in your own match a year ago. Where is the context for the listener?

Do keep it up though; you will be a slick unit by the time the season starts.

Hi guys, thanks for your efforts.

You had been improving, but this podcast was a step back.

1) Don't make baseless accusations about players enjoying a night out in Sydney. If you have it on a good source, then maybe, but this just sounded like you were trashing the player without any justification.

2) Don't talk about what you ate last week. Would you care if you were listening to another podcast that talked about what they ate?

3) Don't moan about something that happened in your own match a year ago. Where is the context for the listener?

Do keep it up though; you will be a slick unit by the time the season starts.