History for Kawasaki

it was a shocking piece of writing (calling it journalism would be blasphemy) on an important bloody subject and hence made 2nd bests posts here on the forum look like almost poetry.

That's what happens I guess when he writes more then one sentence 

it was a shocking piece of writing on an important subject and made 2nd bests posts here on the forum look like poetry.

it was a shocking piece of writing and made 2nd bests posts here look like poetry.