Trying to develop my Creative Writing

I have been really trying to explore creative writing - trying to post daily on my wordpress blog.

Today's poem is called the 'Tapestry of Hype' in the form of a Limerick.
Ripe is the tapestry of hype. 
Millennials dream as they swipe. 
The latest game, 
Is new to blame,
 As miseries latest archetype

If anyone is intersted in my other stories/ poems - please do check out my blog https://thestorytellerpilgrim.wordpress.com. Criticism (particularly of the constructive kind) is greatly appreciated!

Good on ya Maynardf. Any Nix poetry yet?

Nice stuff.  If you're interested in learning more from (imo) one of the best writers around, I'd highly recommend one of Dom Hoey's online courses - https://fb.watch/nBzC3doap8/?mibextid=Nif5oz

Oi Oi Edgecumbe

Good on ya Maynardf. Any Nix poetry yet?

A couple of football related pieces
1.  Brothers in Arms: A Footballing Short Story (Inspired by Yellow Fever on game day) https://thestorytellerpilgrim.wordpress.com/2023/09/10/brothers-in-arms-a-footballing-short-story/
2.  Football | Limerick Poem https://thestorytellerpilgrim.wordpress.com/2023/10/07/football-limerick-poem/

Oska

Nice stuff.  If you're interested in learning more from (imo) one of the best writers around, I'd highly recommend one of Dom Hoey's online courses - https://fb.watch/nBzC3doap8/?mibextid=Nif5oz

Thank you - will check it out!